Initial feedback from the pre-pre-preview copy of the rough draft of Evil Looks Good tells me that I tend towards run-on sentences, (nay, run-on-and-on-and-on-some-more-sentences) the very existence of which suggests that I should simply reduce the rambling thought down to a soundbite like asking a painter to just slap some stick figures in there because the damn thing is simply drawing on for too long, or the way you would reduce an entire e-mail down to simply the subject line because, ‘for God’s sake, man, get to the point, because we’re busy people, and can’t be bothered with your pedantic, run-on-sentences…’

Well, This outta shut you up.

Blog on,
-CZ

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